Some people say that no one should be allowed to work after the age of 65.
Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether people should retire from their duties after crossing a certain age, say 65, or whether they should be permitted to work further according to their personal choice. In my opinion, it should be an individual choice to work even if one is old but with special privileges such as flexible timings and remote working.
It is believed that employees do not remain as productive in their mid-60s as they used to be at an early age. This is due to the fact that medical illness and low level of physical fitness is quite prevalent at this elder age. As a result, the work of such workers is hampered and they do not contribute much in their project activities. However, I disagree with this viewpoint because there are abundant examples of prominent personalities who are in their late or early 70s but still working diligently in their professions. For instance, Donald Trump, the president of the United States who is 73 years old and still fit in his role. Therefore, this opinion to restrict the work permit after the age of 65 is questionable.
On the other side of this argument, if a person is willing to work even after his retirement period, then they should have an official license to do so. As it is often seen that elderly people suffer from stress when they quit or retire from their jobs because of the sudden change in their usual routine and inability to cope up with this transition. Therefore, I agree with this viewpoint that individuals must have a right to work until they wish but at the same time, there should be relaxation or flexibility to this age group in terms of working hours and access to work from a remote location. IT companies are prime examples of providing opportunities to aged employees after their period of service is completed to support critical projects on-demand basis, which is a win-win situation for both employer and employee.
In conclusion, even though it is recommended that elderly people should be retired after a certain age due to health concerns, I believe that it should not be a hard and fast rule. In fact, this should be a personal decision and employers should facilitate them with some exceptional rights to pursue their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79533678756 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61724713198 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523316062176 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4935011666 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.214285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332493925753 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124560183718 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860271584519 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237293598402 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775697800704 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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