Effective advertising sells products. Describe an advertisement and explain why it is effective.
There is no doubt that commercials play an important role in our time because of a strong influence. Personally, I think that effective advertising can force people to buy some stuff. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, the appearance plays a crucial role in it. One should note here that every commercial tries to depict only positive sides of a product and show that it is more efficient than other stuff. In addition, the main idea is to persuade people that this solution or a thing will be much better and viewers should buy it as soon as possible. However, it is not rarely when an advertise represents false information. It is easy to notice that it happens with cell phone’s commercials, so fascinating and often, unreal, pictures are shown in order to impress the audience and get people’s attention.
Consequently, people tend to believe information that they get, so they are ready to spend enormous amount of money on useless tools and equipment. It is interesting, that especially kids and teens do it. Therefore, beautiful picture and videos play their roles and attract new clients. What is more, consumers are really interested in new features that are introduced, for example, in a new smartphone, so they start to think that their old phone is old-fashioned even if it was bought last year.
To draw the conclusion, advertising has a strong influence on people’s minds by using beautiful pictures which are combined with false information that allows to sell products very effectively.
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...ined with false information that allows to sell products very effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, really, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, no doubt, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02255639098 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9149305408 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6856256291 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101252140887 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387380863694 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655633126549 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714106240551 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479373901526 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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