Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquiry more details about the seminar which would be conducted by your agency. Few of my colleagues and I would like to purchase the entry tickets.
I have been working as software engineer in one of the reputed organizations and this symposium would assist me not only to expand my horizons but also in finding new job opportunities. Firstly, we would be interested in finding the exact dates of the summit, so that we could plan our schedule. Secondly, would it be possible to share the details of both agenda and speakers of the conference. In addition to this, I would really appreciate if you could send the accommodation details as well as the cost broacher.
Our organization has been one of the name sponsors for this event. On that note, I presume you could offer any corporate discount for a group of employees, if applicable.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.879467661 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0557777772 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 4.34317383033 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180217525014 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614974610751 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513199496643 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727411534726 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673520404823 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.