During our social life we experience many remarkable moments with family and friends. I expect that the best memories anyone has are related to them. In my opinion, friends are the family we have elected. In this regard, some people think that friends have to be preserved and maintained throughout one’s entire life. On the other hand, many others consider that any stage deserves different friends, and they simply make friends. According to my experience, I prefer making new friends. Some reasons are stated below.
First, it is clear that any step in any life represents such a direct opportunity to make new friends. As we cannot stop our stages, it is almost obvious to see new people. For instance, when we begin a new course or we change our job, we are likely to have the opportunity to find partners and mates to share new experiences. Then, refusing to make friends is strange; it simply happens. A lot of people are friend seekers, however, I believe that great people, who make you feel good, should not be disregarded. For instance, I met my group of best friends in high school, but I do not discard making more.
Second, it is important to recognize that people come and go in our lives. This means that it is difficult for a friendship to last forever since the paths often separate. During the lived stages we are going to cross with different people, and this is a clear example that we can make new friends. For the rest, as we get older we need new people from distinct backgrounds: possibly we call for friends, lawyers, doctors or experts in certain things. The larger our groups, the easier it will be for us to solve certain problems together with others.
The third point is about my personal experience. I met my best friend when I was a child, I met my wife at high school and my most interesting group of friends appeared in my life at college, some few years ago. In any step I have met incredible people, and my steps are still going on. In other words, I have not even met my future friends. Then, I don’t know if my list of friends is full, nevertheless, it is not closed. It does not mean that my old friends and contacts are candidates to be forgotten.
In a nutshell, there is no reason to disregard the beautiful opportunity to make new friends. To sum up, many pros are evident in increasing our group of friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...xpect that the best memories anyone has are related to them. In my opinion, friends...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt in increasing our group of friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, third, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59389671362 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54516066293 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5049453208 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2692307692 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247672774858 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737280221304 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603480962094 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149982548738 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527722992294 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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