Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Darbie and I am the head of this locality. I am writing in reference to the advertisement regarding the award for the ones who have rendered help to this society.
Mary is a 70 years old women and a retired police officer. She resides at 10-Cox-Street, Gora for the past 50 years. I believe, she will be the best fit to receive this award as, she ever ready to help people on the streets. In addition, she makes sure that her donations have reached the right hands.
Firstly, she runs an non-profitable charity trust, where she is feeding the poor children on the roads. Further, she provides shelter to the abandoned by sharing her office space, which have saved many from dying out of extreme weather.
Based on the awards listed on your newspaper, I would suggest that the best fit for her will be "The Mother protector" award.
If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me at 909 999 0087.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you
Yours faithfully,
Darbie
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community sugg 61
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community sugg 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d the right hands. Firstly, she runs an non-profitable charity trust, where she...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75135135135 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66245711084 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5203995807 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182469414136 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618331547746 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655742457629 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076303387272 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525013575409 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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