University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities encourage student to learn range of other subjects.To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give examples where relevant.

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University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities encourage student to learn range of other subjects.

To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give examples where relevant.

Studying to different range of subject is paramount for students. Although university learners frequently stare at particular subject, some people believes that, academics can encouraged by universities to teach variety of other subjects.I strongly agree with second one statement, following paragraph will intend to analyse my view on this approach.

To embark with, study with a range of subject can beneficial for students future.They will definitely get splendid job, and knowledge with aid of variety of subjects.For example employees must need to know about practical knowledge which related to science for get good job in companies.Additionally due to familiar with variety of subject masses tend to teach in an effective way to their children at primary school so that the more parents know about subjects more the provide knowledge to their kids and aid to get higher marks in examination.

Moreover, if universities students can learn variety of subject then they can give their fund onto growth of economic Nation because today economic growth of any nation is paramount for real development of nations.Take Indian people are doing most of work with splendid knowledge of all subject so that is way it is undeniable truth that, Indian economy is more powerful than others country.

In conclusion, I agree that more knowledge of subjects can help us to develop child’s and nation growth and it will beneficial for getting a jobs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36086956522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99948325732 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.69575273 49.4020404114 346% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.6 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190567485075 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109860223285 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619209871893 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122190010173 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712225234752 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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