As the world is embracing more and more produce which is made using latest technologies, with open arms, there is no denying the fact that, secret admiration and yearning for handmade artistry, will never die. I am also a firm believer of its craftsmanship and human touch it brings as value add with it.
Handmade products, firstly, are more Labour intensive, generating lot of jobs for the less educated people at remove locations and give them chance to earn more. However, this is not the only rationale for my inclination towards handcrafted goods. In fact, it is symbolic of exclusivity and individuality, as artists create it with thier own vision and hands, with loads of human emotions, hence taking care of all the intricacies of detailing and design, which is very difficult to achieve using machines.
In addition to being unique, hand made products are of high quality and an outcome of meticulous construction. To illustrate this, recent Google survey concluded with surge of search done for handmade items like Pyro graphs, clothes, jewelery, sculptures and paintings, while at the same time interest for machine made things plummeted.
It is difficult to convince average consumer, who often conflate machine made with mass production, despite of big bang of technology in almost every area of production. However, we can see the two as "mutual protagonists", solving design problems, enhancing design principles, and Ultimately advancing the future of an articles available in the market.
From. The above argument, it can be concluded that the consumers nostalgia for emotional artistic skills and respect for artistry, furthermore connect with creativity and uniqueness, is not going to see downward trends, though with the gush of ready-to-wear mass production goods.
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job You think he she should get a job 84
- Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98675413415 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669014084507 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9472438812 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.8 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132271209276 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050824027165 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516859635079 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707180777662 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438737017313 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.