The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
These two designs below illustrates the blueprints of sports centre and its future arrangements after blossoming of it which is located in university.
Nowadays, university sports centre has two outdoor courts in the west and east side of building. Moreover, reception is at the entrance and a pool is also located in the middle of sports centre. However, at northwest and north- east direction of pool, changing room and a seating area is available. At the last corner of building, a gym facility is also available.
after reconstruction of sports centre, some sites will remain same such as pool, changing room, a seating area and gym except the size of gym will be double then.
Simultaneously some buildings will be completely demolished after transformation of centre, For instance, outdoor courts. In spite of them two changing room will be established in a centre.
some new features will be added in a sports centre after its redevelopment. two dance studios and a sports hall will be constructed at east direction of sports centre. At east and west direction of entrance, cafe and sports shop will be built for the enjoyment of sportsman. Lastly, a pool will be manufactured at west side of center for leisure of sportsman.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ng, a gym facility is also available. after reconstruction of sports centre, some s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...room will be established in a centre. some new features will be added in a sports ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Two
... sports centre after its redevelopment. two dance studios and a sports hall will be...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... redevelopment. two dance studios and a sports hall will be constructed at east direct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02427184466 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95497123992 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480582524272 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0214240787 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166435627287 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756155547419 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385394880371 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976764141369 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330353380291 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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