Some people believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people. While others disagree .Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since the advent of modern technology occured, living is getting easier these days. But, because of this, people of lower income and higher income get isolated from each other what causes a distance in their life styles, according to some while others disagree with that statement. In my opinion, it is obvious that modern technology has become a part and parcel of our daily life. In contrast, for people who live under poverty line can not get on with technologies, consequently, a gapping line falls between two groups.
Despite living in a contemporary era, some people can not get used to with modern life styles based on automated machines. For example, in an economic survey, in asian countries about 20% people are living under poverty line who are not acquainted with modern electrical devices. Because they can not afford the expensive machines to use in their life such, kitchen appliances, television, refrigerator etc. which are generally costly for them to bear even those are responsible for huge electricity consumption literally impossible for them to maintain.
However, others believe that modern technology brings closer all people regardless of their financial status. For example, in every corner, the modern network operators have been reached to provide best services to every stages of users. Moreover, they are given reasonable smartphones with many facilities such internet what made possible to be converged on a same platform which reduces the distances between all poor and rich.
In conclusion, technologies are blessings for making our life comfortable. Although some may not afford to buy expensive stuffs which might create discrimination, most cases all people are privileged by modern technologies which would have not been possible without innovations.
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- In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home? 61
- Some people believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people. While others disagree .Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... line who are not acquainted with modern electrical devices. Because they can not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42348754448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77424447661 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0933821215 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216021686233 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757588867633 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051350368428 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131024180288 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544780422807 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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