The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
A glance to the bar chart provided reveals about World’s OPEC and non-OPEC countries oil productions.
it is evident that the highest amount of oil production is belong to OPEC middle east countries with approximately 17 million barrels a day between 2010 and 2020. However, other OPEC and non-OPEC country have the minimum output at the same period.
between 1980 and 2000, non-OPEC group have the maximum rate about 8 million barrels a day. Although it decreased about 4 million barrels during 2000 and 2010. it is considerable that in 1980 until 2000 the other OPEC countries did not produced any oil production, while OPEC middle east coalition mere produced 2 million barrels each day at the same years.
between 2000 and 2010, other OPEC countries started to produced a considerable amount of oil about 5 million barrels per day and the non-opec countries produced the same output while the OPEC middle east won the competition by producing about 7 million barrels per day at the same period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on-OPEC countries oil productions. it is evident that the highest amount of o...
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Suggestion: belonged
...the highest amount of oil production is belong to OPEC middle east countries with appr...
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Suggestion: Between
...minimum output at the same period. between 1980 and 2000, non-OPEC group have the ...
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Suggestion: It
...4 million barrels during 2000 and 2010. it is considerable that in 1980 until 2000...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'produce'
Suggestion: produce
...l 2000 the other OPEC countries did not produced any oil production, while OPEC middle e...
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...arrels each day at the same years. between 2000 and 2010, other OPEC countries sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10119047619 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61941961644 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4166193719 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183360886962 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119894449921 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823872815982 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165222444975 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747748857891 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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