You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir,
I am Bharat Prajapati , a manager of a PBP India Pvt Ltd. organization. I am writing a letter to give review that i got from my colleagues about their experience at the whole day meeting held at your hotel Welcome Inn on 1St November , 2019.
To commence with, let me give you the positive review about your restaurant . All the attendants loves the ambience and cool environment of the hotel. Specially , they liked the way they received welcome gesture . Moreover, they liked the cleanliness of the hotel.What is more , they were also quite happy with the stationery provided in the beginning of the meeting. Finally , last but not the least the spontaneous responses of their orders from the waiters.
Despite of these , I must confess about the negative concerns about the food.They were really disappointed about the shabby presentation of the meals. There was no creativity in the meals presentation.Our non vegetarian colleague complained about the meat quality and the hardness. The meat was not properly cooked. And i personally had issued with the vegetables , it was look like not fresh and the taste was too ugly.
I would like to suggest that you should employ seasoned chefs with wealth of experience. They should have multi cuisine culinary skills as well as the traditional food . They should have the presentation enough knowledge, Moreover , you must underline that you should use fresh vegetables,meat and must concern about the health of the your customers.
We hope to see a considerable changes on our suggestion and will have awesome on our next conference meeting.
Yours Faithfully,
Bharat Prajapati.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, moreover, really, so, well, as to, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21348314607 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90996522734 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4668965277 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27833247225 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784010758658 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558252038726 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127615800829 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765378758439 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.