In many countries, the level of crimes is interesting and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
The rate and characteristics of the offenders are worth-caring issues. The number of crimes indeed tends to rise, and they are getting more physically because of theoretic education and disadvantages of mass media. There are several solutions to these problems as well.
Firstly, theoric education has negative impacts on individuals committing crimes. People are often under the pressure of the theoretic lessons without knowing what they should do practically that leads to criminal acts. In terms of solution, the government should build a comprehensively educational environment, therefore, students have ideal opportunities for applying the theory to the fact. For example, a teacher should teach moral lessons in the street because children are able to access to unexpected circumstances and perceive how to deal with them.
Secondly, the adverse facets of the development of media influenced criminal issues. Today, action movies, as well as violent games, are getting more prevalent in the global that many people are addicted to them and imitate the negative actions of the figures. To address this reason, the authority needs to pass certain laws in terms of managing media activities as well as impose a fine. For instance, in Vietnam, to reduce the rate of crime, the government deleted some programs that have negative impacts.
In conclusion, the offense is considerably increasing and the criminals tend to be more physical because of the theoric education and disadvantages of media.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4635193133 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98273689907 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3590654831 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106643035583 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032523087589 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354607513112 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063870729336 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245258970283 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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