DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ABOUT PEOPLE ARE SPENDING THERE TIME NOWADAYS DOING WHAT THEY LIKE AND NOT DOING WHAT THEY SHOULD DO?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Responsibility
responsibility is always a mandatory to be fulfilled t...
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Suggestion: Different
...make a society in order and prosperous. different people have different responsibility wh...
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Suggestion: However
...in public administrator or family part. however, many are reluctant to dodge their resp...
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...rank mainly for the personal enjoyment. To begin with, in todays world, a people...
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Suggestion: Whole
...m in discipline is missing trend there. whole system is rife with corruption. Mentali...
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Suggestion: nobody
...cer arrived an hour late but there were no body to ask him a question about his irrespo...
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... a result, I had to suffer for my task. Secondly, even from an individual fails ...
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Suggestion: Even
...ng to do any duty if it is painstaking. even they sought to do that, plenty of error...
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Suggestion: Simple
...bly, no one do their duty with passion. simple example to relate this context is that ...
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Suggestion: a student; students
...tively. Their main religion is to teach a students with their best and flourish the knowle...
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eluded'.
Suggestion: eluded
...execution. Similarly, students are also elude from their task and manage to cheat wha...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...chool, my most of the friends cheated a several time despite they knew that it was immoral. ...
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...ve consideration to the responsibility. To sum up, contemplating all aforementio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97752808989 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0334945826 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7602106977 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248607284735 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710862474293 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894798862642 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149403733736 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572470249772 0.0645574589148 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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