With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
electronic devices are now dramatically developed and widely used. As a result, a lot of works which were once done by human is now performed by machines. This trend is bringing us not only advantages but disadvantages also.
Never before has human's work done by modern techniques as much as it is today. First of all, using machines consumes less time than doing the work ourselves. A lot of works such as paperworks at the office, medical checkings in hospital are done by electronic machines. Secondly, machines work more effectively than human does. machines can create or produce thousands of products that are completely the same and faster than human worker, which factories require. In addition, machines are not tired or sick, they only break down after a long time being used, we just need to fix them.
On the other hand, some machines are too expensive for us to buy. Furthermore, performing to much work by machines leads to bad effects. Not working for a long time, human can become lazy and no longer want to do anything.
In conclusion, electronic devices, howewer, are created by human so it is possible to say human can be perfectly replaced by machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68916402961 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1563347232 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206554250444 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770348198165 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561752117445 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117842032412 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081651457731 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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