Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
Some people agree that wealth and material belongings are the two key elements in order to define success. This essay will examine that wealth has become a major element to measure one’s success and the different factors that helps a person achieve success.
Being more wealthy defines an individual achievements and their level of success. In other words, people with enough money and material belongings are considered as the one’s who have done hardwork and faced various problems to achieve their dreams. One prime example is the popular footballer Cristiano Ronaldo whose value in football rose as he gained success in throughout his career. Similarly, being successful means achieving good quality of life. So, only those who are prosperous enough are found living a well maintained and standard life. Hence, success of an individual can be assessed using his amount of money.
However, there are various factors that aids a person in order to become successful. Firstly, family is a undeniable factor to become successful. If a person receives proper guidance and support from his/her parents, they holds more possible chances to achieve successful life by using the lessons taught by their elders. Secondly, education is also a powerful tool to become rich. When people are well equipped with necessary knowledge and skills, they have better opportunities in terms of employment and career development. Lastly, health is an important element required to be successful. Even if a person has all the above resources, having poor health condition can make his journey towards success problematic.
In conclusion, wealth is the basis of success since it reflects our hardwork and our achievements. However, it does not plays a vital role in having a successful life as much as family, education and health does.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
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Message: Did you mean 'play'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: play
... our achievements. However, it does not plays a vital role in having a successful lif...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31271477663 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70587081571 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8254962438 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279953648097 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869019146591 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086064357096 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194709598549 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100163000895 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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