In today's fast moving and busy world our lifestyle is getting more technology driven with computers being used in almost every aspect. Technology and computers are now being used in personal, profession, and healthcare domain to make the life more easier. In my opinion there are many advantages of the advance technology however its adverse effects may outweigh these to certain extent, and the essay will outline certain points to support this.
People are getting more and more dependent on the technology, not only in their businesses and jobs but also in their day to day activities as this has led to quick turnaround of the work. With increasing dependence on computer, the science and technology is now taking next step toward artificial intelligence. In many of the corporate, pilot projects are already running to eliminate the traditional style of work and scale up the operations with minimum amount of time to complete a task. This has led to replacement of manpower with the robotic technology and therefore scrapping many jobs from the companies.
Not to forget, we have certain adverse impact of the increasing technology. The most important and impacted area comes into picture when we talk about the readily and easily available data online. Computer hackers are so tech savvy that they can easily access the data and credential information and use this to carry on many fraud examples, cyber crime, bank robberies and also misuse of available profiles of individuals. Terrorists are also using this data to make terror attacks with the help of satellites and navigation.
As the technology has come to the stage wherein we cannot imagine our lives without it therefore to make use of this in a most efficient and smart manner is important. Going forward, we should be more careful and vigilant about what information that we share across, or any profile we make on computer be it social networking or healthcare. Government should also make some more firm rules and regulations for the use of technology so its misuse can be avoided.
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- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of 84
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... and healthcare domain to make the life more easier. In my opinion there are many advantage...
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...outline certain points to support this. People are getting more and more depende...
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...scrapping many jobs from the companies. Not to forget, we have certain adverse ...
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...any jobs from the companies. Not to forget, we have certain adverse impact o...
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...ology so its misuse can be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07038123167 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70870925056 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0994299924 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273600858915 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901427277604 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595482569991 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157480597505 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622168441032 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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