Given are diagrams illustrating the percentage of industrial, agricultural and domestic use of water in six different areas of the world .
In Africa, South America, Central and South East Asia more then 70% percent of water goes to the agricultural use , whereas in North America and Europe this present 39 and 32 % respectively opposite there areas consume more water for industrial purposes 48% and 53 % , while industrial targets require only about 10 % average in South America , Africa Central and South East Asia.The biggest persentage of domestic water use can be observed is in the minimum water for domestic needs .the top using water for agricultural purposes is in central Asia 89% and only 32 % of water is used by the European agricultural sector
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- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ater in six different areas of the world . In Africa, South America, Central and ...
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...erica, Central and South East Asia more then 70% percent of water goes to the agricu...
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...nt of water goes to the agricultural use , whereas in North America and Europe thi...
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...ter for industrial purposes 48% and 53 % , while industrial targets require only a...
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...only about 10 % average in South America , Africa Central and South East Asia.The ...
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...ca , Africa Central and South East Asia.The biggest persentage of domestic water us...
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... in the minimum water for domestic needs .the top using water for agricultural pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13008130081 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83225653119 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.0 43.030603864 560% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.5 112.824112599 280% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 22.9334400587 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0249170081165 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013968261968 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.013968261968 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013968261968 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013968261968 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.2329268293 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 61.2550243902 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.3012195122 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.06136585366 135% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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