The first pie chart illustrates energy consumption in an average house in Australia and the second shows the greenhouse gas released as a result of this energy usage.
Overall, while heating needs the greatest proportion of total energy used to operate, water heating releases the highest amount of greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating appliances, including water heating and heating, account for the majority of energy consumed (72%). These are followed by energy use from other appliances, at 15% to be precise. When combined, the percentage energy used by cooling and lighting is relatively equal to that for refrigeration.
In terms of emissions, water heating appliances are the major emitter, producing 32% of greenhouse gas. Other appliances contribute 28% to the gas emissions while heating devices and refrigeration almost produced the same amount of greenhouse gas, at 15% and 14% respectively. The minority of greenhouse gas emitted was from lighting and cooling.
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. 84
- Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Advantages and disadvantages of overseas studying 78
- The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated. 61
- Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect theenvironment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what efects does this have onanimal life and human society? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94071797734 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.322915213 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351692241794 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149546999141 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12598801358 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224564331253 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142482690054 0.0819641961636 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.