HOTEL COMPLAINT

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HOTEL COMPLAINT

Dear manager,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the hospitality and food quality of your renowned restaurant in Ontario.I have visited there yesterday, with a prior reservation for my wedding anniversary. I was unhappy with the entire experience.

There were three major problems.Firstly,the reservation was denied on arrival, we were told by the front office executive that the booking hasn't been recorded due to technical issue.Later, they have arranged a table on the roof-top.Though the ambiance was scenic, the chairs were uncomfortable to sit.Secondly, the food we ordered was medium-Rare stake.But, they served a complete rare stake.As we never prefer eating an undercooked food, we have requested the waiter to replace the food.To our surprise, the waiter denied it and said " orders placed cannot be returned" in a impolite way. Lastly, the hospitality was miserable as the waiters were busy watching a football match and they were so inattentive.This entire episode has ruined the most important event for me.

Therefore, i demand a complete compensation, and suggest you to improve the service quality of the restaurant.

Thanks and regards,

Anirudh akarsh.P

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63586956522 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38945305517 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66847826087 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.705865557 44.8134815571 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.833333333 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 8.37731958763 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 70.7449484536 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 7.45979381443 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 8.71597938144 184% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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