The bar graph give information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make copmarison where relevant.
The column graph provides the amount of books which are taken from Lammertown Public Library in the end of last century and in the begining of that,and chart shows the percentage of members in the library club in 2010.
Overall,there are seven types of books and the most popular one is romance,the lower one is language book.
At the end of 20's century people borrowed less books than in 2001. The leader by borrowing is romance book,after that by preference is selfimprovement books. To compare two types crime novels and authobiographies,these kind of book are taken approximately similar about 400 book. The column for children's fiction shows that in 1991 the number of taking book was higher in 2001 fall down till less than 400. Looking at the pie chart we can see gender constituent of library's membership and more that two quarters are for woman and leftover part is for man.
- Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- The bar graph give information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin 61
- Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...members in the library club in 2010. Overall,there are seven types of books a...
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...ooks and the most popular one is romance,the lower one is language book. At th...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun books is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... the end of 20s century people borrowed less books than in 2001. The leader by borro...
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... The leader by borrowing is romance book,after that by preference is selfimprovement b...
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... types crime novels and authobiographies,these kind of book are taken approximately si...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...types crime novels and authobiographies,these kind of book are taken approximately similar...
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Suggestion: books
...e taken approximately similar about 400 book. The column for childrens fiction shows...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86928104575 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88505645891 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2165358301 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243689779669 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098346319893 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619303259739 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151164340653 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844518456318 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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