You ordered two items from a company on the internet, but the things you received were not exactly the same as the things you ordered.
Write a letter to the manager of the company that sent the items. In your letter
- Explain what you ordered
- Describe the things you received
- Tell the manager of the company what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir,
Before few days I have ordered one pair of Reebok shoes and one denim jeans. Today morning I received it through the courier. I am writing this letter to apprise as well as complain you about that I have received a different things from what i had ordered.
I ordered one pair of shoes of Reebok of feet number 9 and one denim jeans of M size from the www.shopclues.com.What i received was shoes of Nike of 8 feet number and denim jeans of extra-large size which obviously not of my size.
I have been a regular customer from your website but such problem occurred first time. I paid for the two things online which i ordered and i printed out the receipts. I did not understand how this silly mistake done by this type of big online shopping portal.
I would like you to refund the full amount of the things or send me actual thing which i had ordered.
Hoping for a prompt reply from you regarding this matter.
Yours fauthfuly,
Bharat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...ir of Reebok shoes and one denim jeans. Today morning I received it through the courier. I am...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... about that I have received a different things from what i had ordered. I ordered...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e received a different things from what i had ordered. I ordered one pair of...
^
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...ns of M size from the www.shopclues.com.What i received was shoes of Nike of 8 feet ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... M size from the www.shopclues.com.What i received was shoes of Nike of 8 feet nu...
^
Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I paid for the two things online which i ordered and i printed out the receipts....
^
Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e two things online which i ordered and i printed out the receipts. I did not und...
^
Line 13, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ordered and i printed out the receipts. I did not understand how this silly mista...
^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ype of big online shopping portal. I would like you to refund the full amoun...
^
Line 17, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he things or send me actual thing which i had ordered. Hoping for a prompt r...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58522727273 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61195598156 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1252294113 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258543945229 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967979010205 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843648616265 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14220438828 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646906553943 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.