The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.

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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.

the bar graph shows the numbers of make and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. The percentages for information on the quantity of studying computer science subjects. Students in a US university take, divided by gender and measured in research students.

Overall, it is immediately apparent that natural sciences and psychology are studied more than any of the other subjects, whereas linguistics are least studied. At first glance we can see that male learn more than subjects than female for out of seven of the subjects listed, however a subject which is studied by the female more than male is linguistics and an equal number of male and female study natural science.

To begin with, male learn natural science as same as female at around 200 research students. Following this, male learn psychology more than female at 200 and 175 research learners respectively.

On the other hand, there are equal female student in the two subjects of engineering and the programming, the difference is approximately 15 students. But the male study in engineering and programming are similar, 150 research students. Next the number of student learn mathematics between female and male have significant distinction. Finally, for linguistics, the female study more than male at approximately 20 learners.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'students'?
Suggestion: students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, whereas, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31627906977 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90101341835 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497674418605 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7123959798 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523282297388 0.215688989381 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220198809491 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202682671507 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342754637263 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191103752754 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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