Explain some of the ways humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems. However, the authorities and individuals can make major strides to overcome these issues.
On the one hand, burning fossil fuel is the leading cause of environmental menace. This is because it produces a higher level of carbon emissions and greenhouse gases to the atmosphere. These greenhouse gases and co2 absorb radiation and deter heat from escaping our air. Consequently, this excess warmth creates disrupted weather patterns, higher global temperature averages in the climate. For instance, scientists have recently found that global greenhouse gas emissions by 65% of fossil fuel and greenhouse gases. Moreover, there are more things people do which as well wreak havoc the environment, such as logging trees, using pesticides on cropland.
On the personal level, there are many ways to lower the impact which are hazardous for the environment. Using bicycles to work or university rather than using personal cars and increase the use of environmentally friendly products, which will cut back carbon dioxide emissions. Besides, governments should take a vital approach to fortify the matter. If they take steps against global warming, such as set up rules against cutting trees and burning fossil fuel then, people will find another option of energy resources which is less peril for our environment. What is more, creating awareness and protecting natural forests will somehow get a prospective solution.
In conclusion, environmental threats are growing due to man-made activities. Firstly, the use of energy resources as natural gas is the main cause, where the government and citizens can take action to stop the effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48288973384 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86629477501 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5259508499 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17402463903 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520513477659 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429407398734 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107853570592 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452192288561 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.