Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you want to work there
– What skills and work experience you have
– Inquire about the benefits (salary and hours).
Hey Cameroon,
How have you been these days? How are Mary and kids. It's been a while that I heard from you people. Lopez and I are doing great, busy juggling between work and personal life. Anyway, the reason I am writing this is to ask few suggestions about working in your country.
As you already know that Canada has been my all-time favourite work-locations, I have been lately thinking of a career shift and relocating to Canada. what do you think? I am a Cloud Migration expert engineer currently working for Amazon with 10 years of over-all experience. Cloud Engineering is a hot-skill at the moment globally. I uploaded my résumé to a couple of online sourcing portals to get an idea and as expected my skill is in demand in your country too.
However, all information was not available online. Can you tell me how many working hours are mandate usually? Also, what could be the pay scale of a 10 years experienced software worker? Lastly , how about the insurance? Is the whole family covered in employment benefits?
I thought it would a good idea to ask you rather than researching on the vast web. What do you suggest me? Is it a good thought to consider?
Love,
John Gresham
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[12]
Message: The singular proper name Mary must be used with 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... How have you been these days? How are Mary and kids. Its been a while that I ...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... career shift and relocating to Canada. what do you think? I am a Cloud Migration ex...
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Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ears experienced software worker? Lastly , how about the insurance? Is the whole f...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, if, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64332173902 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.911813752 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.9473684211 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1578947368 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298045923608 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758212507024 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699579783621 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168087706589 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569322967498 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.