If the nation will provide same national curriculum to the students until they enter college then few of the things will be missed out in the Nation's progress. The innovation will be missed in many of the sectors as all the children passing out from the school will have limited knowledge of the subjects outside their domains which they have studied before entering to the college. The country will not be able to excel in the Research & Development departments because of lack of people's interest and less curiosity about a topic. In the childhood days, the government's policies will be streamlining the youth's thought process which will result in the wastage of time as per ones own interests. For example, if a student is not good in mathematics and has no interest in learning it either. By forcing the child or the group of children studying a similar curriculum will make them waste their time and result in bad productivity. What the nation can do, instead of making it mandatory national curriculum, is to define subjects where a student can choose their own subject according to their interest which will then result in better productivity of the students and better results as well.
On a separate note, if the nation provides same curriculum to the students until they enter college will ensure that there is common knowledge passed to the upcoming youth and they would behave in a common manner because of the inherited values.More synchronous behavior of the growing youth can be observed in the upcoming years. This practice will make sure that each and every citizen of the nation even from its early days of education is never deprived of the most basic aspects about life and morality. And once the common knowledge is shared with all the youth population, the students can pursue other things by their own according to their interests. This will give students enough flexibility to build their interests into their working and concentrate on the project/job of their own interests. By doing so, Nation's growth rate would increase tremendously. As each one of the person, is acting according to their interests and not forcibly working on some mundane job.
In conclusion, if I were to select the option out of these two, then probably I'll be going forward with the latter one. The second paragraph provides better aspects about life of the citizens living in a nation in a longer time frame. Hence, it is recommended to go with the advantageous way of working than otherwise!
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If the nation will provide same national c...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a common manner" with adverb for "common"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he upcoming youth and they would behave in a common manner because of the inherited values.More sy...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
... manner because of the inherited values.More synchronous behavior of the growing you...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... option out of these two, then probably Ill be going forward with the latter one. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91016548463 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62016201341 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9793705923 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8125 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272833029781 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853559832348 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102445330858 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165689262999 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907136199603 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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