kid and smart phone

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
I have a daughter. she is 18th months old. I love my girl so m...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I love my girl so much. Sometimes, when i busy i give her my cellphone to her pla...
^
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my girl so much. Sometimes, when i busy i give her my cellphone to her play game....
^
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...give her my cellphone to her play game. but i do not know, it is my mistake. now, s...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... her my cellphone to her play game. but i do not know, it is my mistake. now, she...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...e. but i do not know, it is my mistake. now, she like the phone than me. she do not...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...e. now, she like the phone than me. she do not want to go out home to play with fa...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...amily, just stay on bed with the phone. it make her become shy, passive and isolat...
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Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ly, just stay on bed with the phone. it make her become shy, passive and isolated. A...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ome shy, passive and isolated. Although i try to take her out the phone by go to ...
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Line 1, column 412, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...ne by go to the zoo, mall but it is not bring a good result. Lisas daughter of my fri...
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Line 1, column 471, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
.... Lisas daughter of my friend, she also have a time like my daughter. my friend so w...
^^^^
Line 1, column 501, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... she also have a time like my daughter. my friend so worry and doctor tell her mus...
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Line 1, column 540, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... my friend so worry and doctor tell her must to stop use phone now, it is so harmful fo...
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Line 1, column 616, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... harmful for brain and eyes. Yesterday, i give her a Christmas gift, a cute dog, ...
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Line 1, column 677, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...s gift, a cute dog, and so surprise she give up the phone immediately. she played wi...
^^^^
Line 1, column 708, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...rise she give up the phone immediately. she played with the dog all day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 585.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.77419354839 5.12529762239 74% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08078269113 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8257173813 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 45.0 106.682146367 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990339837271 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035945911525 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475360662301 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990339837271 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.3 13.0946893788 18% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.15 50.2224549098 187% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 11.3001002004 26% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 3.7 12.4159519038 30% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.51 8.58950901804 64% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 78.4519038076 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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