Some people think that children should attend extra classes after school while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few people think extra classes should be attended by students. While other thinks it is not needed. As we look on a large scale we see that competion is increasing day by day and people wants to get successful and wants to achieve their specific goals in their life. In which academics plays a very significant role. In my upcoming paragraphs I would like to discuss both opinion and give my views on this topic.
To embark upon, in this contemporary world everyone is greatly obsessed with their dreams and aims. So it is important to understand for today's generation that studies and exams are essential part of our life, for example if a student is not being able to give time to his/her studies at home so they can attend extra lessons after school. Which would be beneficial for them and help them to increase their grades as well. Moreover, by attending tuitions will help a child to clear the doubts and open up their bewildered minds
On the other hand, some people disagree to this.
They think that going for the tuitions will lessened their confidence which would be a loss for a child and will affect their overall performance in school. But i personally feel that side classes have many benefits for students because they will be able to take homework given by their tutor. And it gives them confidence to ask any query in.
To put in a nutshell, it can be confidently stated that attending extra classes after school is worthy for students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...classes should be attended by students. While other thinks it is not needed. As we lo...
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Suggestion:
...oubts and open up their bewildered minds On the other hand, some people disagree ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lessen'
Suggestion: lessen
... think that going for the tuitions will lessened their confidence which would be a loss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71705426357 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44039884889 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3934823545 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249155345889 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970927604842 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961384034701 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154860863789 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801760359634 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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