The graph below shows the consumption of fish and meat in European countries
The provided bar graph illustrates the amount of tea and coffee imported by four nations, namely canada, us, uk and germany.
Overall, it is clear that all nations except uk were highest in imported coffee, while only uk had imported maximum amount of tea.
Regarding the germany, obviously coffee had slightly more imported than tea, with approximately 51000 tonnes, compared to around 41000 for tea. However, the least volume of tea was imported by canada ( exact 20000 tonnes), whereas the imported coffee accounted for almost double with about 39000 tonnes.
Turning to further information, exactly 40000 tonnes of coffee imported by the us it was almost same as in the canada. Moreover, the amount of tea imported in the us was just above 22000 tonnes. Interestingly, uk was only the nation where amount of tea imported was higher as opposed to other countries. uk had imported 80000 tonnes of tea and 30000 tonnes of coffee respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ighest in imported coffee, while only uk had imported maximum amount of tea. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast volume of tea was imported by canada exact 20000 tonnes, whereas the imported...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...where amount of tea imported was higher as opposed to other countries. uk had impo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Uk
...s higher as opposed to other countries. uk had imported 80000 tonnes of tea and 30...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56451919692 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4909075878 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0093866186251 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00606430519613 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160446434234 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0121286103923 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210073694246 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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