some people believe that government spends too much money on space research while there are still a lot of problems on the earth.what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.give reasons for your answer nand include any relevent from your own experience
Some civilians argue that local council has been spent money on space research while the problems on earth have not been solved yet.To a huge extent, I disagree with the statement and will give some relevant argument to justify my claim.
To embark with,the motive of space research is to solve the issues of earth.To illustrate, the scarcity of food,water, and land is one of the major problem because the population ratio has been increased dramatically. To provide enough amount of these primary needs to our future generation,researching in space is vital. Other than that,the contaminated land and water resources could easily identify with the help of satellite. By the help of these satellites the polluted area could be easily found out and necessary step taken out as soon as possible to cure the hazardous area.
Apart from that,the needs of technology has forced us to research more in this fields.For example,every country might want to be the best in space research due to several purpose: to help miltary, to improve communication sectors and to become digital nation. Lastly, due to the space research, we have managed to avoid disasters and saved many lives of civilians. For example, the earthquake of 2000 in Kutch was identified by the american satellite 5 hours before and because of that we were able to inform the people.
However, the consumption of fuel by PSLV and GSLV rockets and failed attempts of the space missions have concerned people much.Local authorities and scientists should take some crucial steps to avoid these problems.
agglomerating all the arguments and examples one can say that in order to solve the earth's problems,space research is necessary. The more knowledge of the universe,the less problem the next generation will face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, while, apart from, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91423175641 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0315786061 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.272727273 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18235497224 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607347101276 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522551212067 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977925263702 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529697744666 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.