Choosing a suitable job is really important for people who have finished studying at school because it can decide how their lives is. Some people said that when choosing a job, salary is criteria that is put on top.I’m partially agree about that.
I completely agree that applicants should be concern about their income when they decide to apply a job. It’s important because it can help them have motivation to make effort to work for that company. For instance, when you are invited by two companies, the first thing you concern about is the salary you can get if you employed. If you see a company pay a higher wage for you, I’m a hundred percent sure that you will choose that one.
On the other hand, if you are a person who want to be with a company in a long-term time, the most important thing that you should care is the kind of work you will do. Is that job popular?; Is that job interesting? And the most important, Do you like that job? When you find a job that is suitable for you, a job that you do well, you will be so happy to work. Thay may pay you a low salary level, but, when you like are interested in your job, you can have a enormous success.
In conclusion, that you like a high salary job or not is spending on how your option is. In my point of view, nothing is more important than whether you have determine or not.
- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 61
- The chart below shows information about students studying in six major subjects at the US university in 2010. 73
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I&apos
..., salary is criteria that is put on top.I'm partially agree about that. I comple...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
...pletely agree that applicants should be concern about their income when they decide to ...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...re interested in your job, you can have a enormous success. In conclusion, that...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...is more important than whether you have determine or not.
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an whether you have determine or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31128404669 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32641225435 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509727626459 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0604089569 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394677267846 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167612235064 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708709094947 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244712128155 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707522310715 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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