Dear John,
How Are You? I am very thankful to you it is a great holiday with you. Just now I safely reached Hyderabad. It's been a long journey from Delhi to Hyderabad. You know I am missing you right now, These seven days are passed like a one day this trip gave me so many memories.
When I reached home, I know I forgot my wallet in your home. The Wallet is very precious to me because it is my brother's gift. When I am packing my luggage I kept my wallet on the cupboard. When Cab reaches I forgot to kept the wallet in my pocket with my hurry. You know my credit cards and Identity cards are in the wallet only.
Can you please collect my wallet and pass it to Vikram. Present he is in Delhi at the hotel Taj. He will be free at weekends. So please can you gave my wallet to him. He will come back to Delhi by Monday. It is the best way to myself to recollect the wallet.
I am troubling yourself am so sorry for this. I promise when you visit my city I will arrange best Lunch for you.
With Love
Bhanuprakash
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Hey Prakash,
Hey Prakash,
I hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for a great Holiday. This holiday gave me a lot of memories and I really enjoyed this total trip in your place Delhi.
I reached home safely but When unpacking my bags, I figured out I forgot my wallet at your house. As you know I will forget everything like this. I remembered that wallet in the bedroom where I stayed. Please Collect the wallet and please gave it to Ramesh. He will come to your home to collect it and It is the easiest way to recollect it from him
I look forward to you and when you visit my place Am sure I will arrange a good Lunch for you.
with love
Bhanuprakash
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s to me because it is my brothers gift. When I am packing my luggage I kept my walle...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ggage I kept my wallet on the cupboard. When Cab reaches I forgot to kept the wallet...
^^^^
Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'arrange the best'.
Suggestion: arrange the best
...I promise when you visit my city I will arrange best Lunch for you. With Love Bhanupraka...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08333333333 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14270644002 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.660961891 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.8421052632 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7368421053 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307714982715 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10040981539 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100490681795 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190383131746 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525157570575 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 8.37731958763 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.2 8.71597938144 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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