These days, environmental pollution and waste has increased to great extent what problems does it cause to humans? Suggest some solutions to solve these problems?
Nowadays, many problems caused by environmental issues such as garbage and pollution interest the human life. This essay will first suggest the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is a detrimental diseases spread in the atmosphere and then submit making pollution protection techniques as the most viable solution.
The foremost problem caused by a garbage and obnoxious gases are enhanced the harmful diseases which upsurged in mankind life. Millions of people all over the world lives in the metropolitan cities if where pollution ris day by day, therefore, the people of those city will die with skin cancer and lose their life span due to these hassels.Health is a Paramount for the human beings to perform any task easily but the diseases will cause a million of people to become dying. As an instance, the Network Times reported that 43% of masses in India country died from cancer alleviate in every year because of pollution Hassel occurred in India since 2000 year to until 21stcentury.
The most practical solution to this problem is a government sponsored awareness campaign an effective campaign could warm of the dangers of a pollution and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public this raised awareness of the problem would lead many people starting to growing more trees and use of compress natural gas fuel into the vehicles.for example the United State of America recently lobbied their citizens to grow more plants into the cities and promoted to use carbon dioxide and monoxide free fuel and this resulted in a dramatic decrease in pollution waste related issues such as rubbish and smoke .
To conclude, the lurrent pollution crisis has been caused by a over use of smoking vehicles a states should curtail this by educating men and women on how to make an existing atmosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10101010101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61272374941 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.099819192 49.4020404114 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.428571429 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.4285714286 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197379236892 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963261731579 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611639311054 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114628490498 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063171447298 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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