• Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
The people of earth have been divided into two parts with one called ‘Vegetarians ‘and others called ‘Non-vegetarians’. Vegetarians believe that not eating meat or fish is not only better for their own health but also is advantageous for the whole universe. According to my views, it is not necessary for a person to be vegetarian but one must have limited consumption of meat or fish.
Primarily, people who don’t prefer eating fish or meat, claim to be healthier than those who eat it. Being a vegetarian keeps you healthy and fit as no vegetable has any side-effects on a person’s well being¬¬. Vegetables provide people the basic nutrients essential for a human body and with not being interested in eating animal food, one remains more focused on eating fruits apart from vegetables. There are many vegetables that can be used as a medicine for a particular illness whereas some other varieties of them are helpful in achieving the basic health conditions of a person.
The second school of thought is that Meat or Fish provide proteins in abundance as compared to the vegetables. They provide the required level of nutrients in just one meal that can never be achieved through a similar way of consuming vegetables. Nowadays, it’s been necessary for eating meat in order to cope up with the working standards as industries require strong and active people as soon as possible.
In agglomerate, in order to maintain a healthy lifestyle in any part of the world, one should eat more vegetables as compared to meat or fish.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08461538462 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18711115507 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9020260996 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2221594555 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990777110599 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114634555381 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131996730664 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481415113657 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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