The market for the luxury-goods industry i s on the decline. Recent reports
show that a higher unemployment rate, coupled with consumer fears, has
decreased the amount of money the average household spends on both
essential and nonessential items, but especially on nonessential items.
Since luxury goods are, by nature, nonessential , this market will be the
first to decrease i n the present economic cl i mate, and luxury retailers
should refocus their attention to lower-priced markets.
The argument that recent reports show a higher unemployment rate, coupled with customers fear, has decreased the amount of money the average household spends on both essential and nonessential items, but especially on nonessential items is not logically convincing, since it ignores certain crucial assumptions.
First, the argument assumes that luxury retailers might not have customers again due to the present economic breakdown, whereas there is nothing to show whether this is true.
Second, the argument never addresses the fact that the unemployment will not affect all the customers and will also be temporary as some customers will still continue to purchase luxury goods.
Finally, the argument omits the fact that some of the customers might be self-employed and thus will not be affected by the unemployment that hits the society.
Thus, the argument is not completely sound. the evidence in support of the conclusion that higher unemployment rate coupled with customers fear will decreased the amount of money spent on both essential and nonessential items is not sufficient because it does not addresses the assumption raised. Ultimately, the argument might have been strengthened if the author could prove that present economic condition will affect the self- employed or the entire population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 43, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nally, the argument omits the fact that some of the customers might be self-employed and th...
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Line 17, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Line 17, column 150, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...t rate coupled with customers fear will decreased the amount of money spent on both essen...
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Line 17, column 265, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'address'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: address
...s is not sufficient because it does not addresses the assumption raised. Ultimately, the ...
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Line 17, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'address'
Suggestion: address
...s is not sufficient because it does not addresses the assumption raised. Ultimately, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, still, then, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 55.5748502994 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 2260.96107784 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 441.139720559 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59900990099 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84609983765 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 204.123752495 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.147089831 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.571428571 119.503703932 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.70786347227 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185832365406 0.218282227539 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866404680249 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116359101606 0.0701772020484 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108555209822 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116572155648 0.0628817314937 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.3799401198 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.5979740519 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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