In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod. The

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In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod. The archaeologist proposed that vessels were ancient electric batteries and even demonstrated that they can produce a small electric current when filled with some liquids. However, it is not likely that the vessels were actually used as electric batteries in ancient times.

First of all, if the vessels were used as batteries, they would probably have been attached to some electricity conductors such as metal wires. But there is no evidence that any metal wires were located near the vessels. All that has been excavated are the vessels themselves.

Second, the copper cylinders inside the jars look exactly like copper cylinders discovered in the ruins of Seleucia, an ancient city located nearby. We know that the copper cylinders from Seleucia were used for holding scrolls of sacred texts, not for generating electricity. Since the cylinders found with the jars have the same shape, it is very likely they were used for holding scrolls as well. That no scrolls were found inside the jars can be explained by the fact that the scrolls simply disintegrated over the centuries.

Finally, what could ancient people have done with the electricity that the vessels were supposed to have generated? They had no devices that relied on electricity. As batteries, the vessels would have been completely useless to them.

The essay tells that through excavation by the villagers they found clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod which may be used as ancient electric batteries, but later they denied it as an electric battery. however, the speaker approached that, the thinking may not be true and not convincing, that's why she gives three examples on it.

First, from the essay, it is said that excavating vessels contains no electric conductors, which means there is no chance of using these vessels an electric batteries. On the other hand, the speaker states that as the vessels are excavating by the villagers who are not professional archaeologists. So, it is possible that they fail to notice the metal wire or they can't recognize it anyway.

Secondly, the essay states that these vessels exactly look like the copper cylinders discovered in the ruins of Seleucia and are used for holding scrolls of sacred texts. But, the speaker, in that case, gives another opinion. she provides information that the copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod may be used as the wire to produce electricity.

Finally, the paragraph asks a question about what could ancient people have done with the electricity that the vessels were supposed to have generated? To answer this question the speaker tells that these kinds of vessels may produce mild shock which some people in that time believe as magical power. Besides, these ancient people were so generous that, they use this electricity for healing because in modern time doctors use electric shock waves to treat their patients. so, It was not impossible in those ancient times.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: However
... they denied it as an electric battery. however, the speaker approached that, the think...
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Suggestion: that's
...ing may not be true and not convincing, thats why she gives three examples on it. F...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'batterie', 'battery'?
Suggestion: batterie; battery
...ance of using these vessels an electric batteries. On the other hand, the speaker states ...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y fail to notice the metal wire or they cant recognize it anyway. Secondly, the es...
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Suggestion: She
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Suggestion: So
...ic shock waves to treat their patients. so, It was not impossible in those ancient...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, finally, first, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57516460729 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5986968275 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174210096885 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638436287249 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790028240401 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118266784875 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609550122096 0.0443174109184 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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