Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
n recent years, the attitude towards how a criminal should be punished has experienced a notable alteration. While capital punishment is practiced in many part of the world, there are also those who believes that it is no more appropriate. I strongly believe the latter view. This essay will outline pros and cons of this phenomenon
Firstly, the most detrimental effect of capital punishment lies in the fact that it fails to offer the criminal an opportunity to rectify. To illustrate, it is widely accepted that individuals are often committing crimes as they are under the influence of mental illness or illicit drugs. For this reason, countries like Canada, for an example believe that If they are sentenced to death, it would have hindered them from receiving necessary therapies and reversing back to a healthy life. Furthermore, capital punishment is inextricably linked with violation of human rights. In this era of globalization, the period of advancing education and morals, death sentence primarily undermines human rights. This is because everyone has equal right to live longer. Therefore killing someone, whatever the reason is, not only manifest brutality but also raises the questions of subsequent government's rules of humanity
Despite the above, viable reasons exists for prevailing this process. Chief amongst them is demonstrating an example of how dire the consequences could be when a person will commit a homicide. To describe, if a person Instills in his mind about the exemplary punishment, such as hanging, he might logically refrain himself from doing the related offends.
Furthermore, government often resort to hang a murderer based on public pressure. For an example, people of some developing countries often urged exemplary punishment, a death sentence, when unexpected ending of lives had overwhelmed their insights, such as death from gang rape.
To conclude, capital punishments have been possessing not only harms, but also benefits to some extent. From my perspective, although it sometimes seems rational, yet the idea of rectifying offenders and human rights should be prioritized
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4578313253 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91684482655 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647590361446 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2831103048 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144531894251 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041814308039 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421196889601 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746939640615 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031115764488 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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