A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
– Thank him/her for inviting you
– Describe how you felt about his/her family members
– Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place
Hi Sabrina
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you the other day.
I saw that you asked me about my favourite day of the week.
It is defintely Friday.
Because there is my favorite subject. I like physical education. In PE class, we play football.
After school, we also play football as well. We relax our study stress by playing football.
In the evening, we usually go to a restaurant or friend's house to have a party or sing songs.
The evening of friday seems to be very short.
And i make some plans for the weekend in my sleep...
I'd like to know what the day of the weeknd you favourite.
Please write it in next letter.
Looking forward to your response.
Say hello to your family.
Lancer.
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- A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter– Thank him/her for inviting you– Describe how you felt about his/her family members– Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place 56
- A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter– Thank him/her for inviting you– Describe how you felt about his/her family members– Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adverts
...e in today is dominated by advertising. adverts are on television, on the world Wide We...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...recently been banned in many countries. it is quite possible that alcohol adverts ...
^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ing in the same way as smoking. it is certainly true to say that advertisi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 937.175257732 164% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90540540541 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7585846445 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0255444949086 0.216113520407 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100719189171 0.0766984524023 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155397447166 0.0603063233224 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0115718690826 0.12726935374 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164037783419 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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