Hi Sabrina
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you the other day.
I saw that you asked me about my favourite day of the week.
It is defintely Friday.
Because there is my favorite subject. I like physical education. In PE class, we play football.
After school, we also play football as well. We relax our study stress by playing football.
In the evening, we usually go to a restaurant or friend's house to have a party or sing songs.
The evening of friday seems to be very short.
And i make some plans for the weekend in my sleep...
I'd like to know what the day of the weeknd you favourite.
Please write it in next letter.
Looking forward to your response.
Say hello to your family.
Lancer.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: lamboris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15591397849 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26798257084 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3852851435 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225094936648 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924855849889 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081121651147 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117848226985 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077089886208 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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