Hi Sabrina
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you the other day.
I saw that you asked me about my favourite day of the week.
It is defintely Friday.
Because there is my favorite subject. I like physical education. In PE class, we play football.
After school, we also play football as well. We relax our study stress by playing football.
In the evening, we usually go to a restaurant or friend's house to have a party or sing songs.
The evening of friday seems to be very short.
And i make some plans for the weekend in my sleep...
I'd like to know what the day of the weeknd you favourite.
Please write it in next letter.
Looking forward to your response.
Say hello to your family.
Lancer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f the week. It is defintely Friday. Because there is my favorite subject. I like ph...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of friday seems to be very short. And i make some plans for the weekend in my s...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...plans for the weekend in my sleep... Id like to know what the day of the weeknd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30909098598 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706766917293 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 290.88556701 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 16.3608247423 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8518359534 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 38.0 76.5299724578 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.3125 16.8248392259 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183802041474 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538648024746 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625045318674 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656530442847 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644097254723 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.74 70.7449484536 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 7.45979381443 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.15 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 8.62886597938 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 8.54432989691 61% => OK
text_standard: 3.0 8.15463917526 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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