Everyone in life is looking for happiness, and although it is crucial, we can not find an ultimate definition that defines happiness, so why is it hard to describe? And how can we say if a person is happy or not?
Before we know why defining happiness is difficult, we got to understand why it is so important. In my opinion, the reason behind the importance of happiness is the way we look at it. People think about it as a place that everyone wants to go, a place where everyone is alright, life is comfortable, and there is no sadness. However, even though this place exists in everyone's mind, each one of us has his own path to go there, and this is what makes happiness hard to define.
People have different thoughts about happiness, some of them see it as getting the best job, others as getting the best house, money, health, family, and many other things that people see as a way to happiness, and everyone has his own definition of it.
However, there are many factors in achieving happiness, and they depend on the definition we gave to happiness. The one that thinks happiness is wealth, his main factor is a certain amount of money, the one who sees it as a beautiful house his main factor will be a house of his dreams, and so on. In my belief, the most important criterion in achieving happiness is being satisfied with your self, no matter what is the thing that you are persuing if it makes you satisfied and proud of your self then you have achieved happiness.
In conclusion, although the definition of happiness varies from one to another, it is the most important thing in our lives to achieve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54576271186 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57982805312 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498305084746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9057238095 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.909090909 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232866853662 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091120957951 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529348071785 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120666327746 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596945724166 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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