Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this answer
Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this answer
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DBABFE5681CF874EED2F4EE0A1DB125E" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class=""><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-ED22D4CF4C83424E3E44AF83B8B5443A" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">It </pwa></pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DBABFE5681CF874EED2F4EE0A1DB125E" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class=""><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-ED22D4CF4C83424E3E44AF83B8B5443A" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is belie</pwa></pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DBABFE5681CF874EED2F4EE0A1DB125E" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class=""><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-ED22D4CF4C83424E3E44AF83B8B5443A" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I believe it~We believe it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It is believed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">ved</pwa></pwa> that government should build more railways rather than roads. Why I accept that this may suit many people, but I also believe that the government may base on two main factors that is natural condition and people’s preference.
On the one hand, it is clear that the decision in broadening more railroad is reasonable <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AF31B53F92ABDC6D58061E5F0AEAACF0" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_167" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in many ways " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in many ways </pwa>. First, to some civilized countries with a healthy economy, rail transport is one of the most convenient way to freight vast amount of goods, it will also make a positive impact on the logistic cost. for example, the selling price of commodity will <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-51C21BE429A4CBACFE075513B37197FA" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be much cheaper compared" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be much cheaper compared</pwa> to road transport because of traffic jams. Second, by manufacturing a large-scale subway might solve the problem about traffic congestion to most commuters and avoid the amount of emission from the land vehicle. for instance, Japan is very famous for its extensive and innovative railways, the citizens mostly opt for public transportation for their daily commuting. as a result, Japan are nearly free from traffic congestion and air pollution.
At the other hand, it is also fundamental for a government to have some detailed research about the terrain of the area before planning to upgrade railroads. it is clear that some area of each nation has its own perk and the fact that some area might not suitable for constructing railroads such as highland or rocky mountainous area. if the government built the railway network, the cost would be prohibitively expensive. besides, the government should take into considerations the benefits and limits from building railroads. people preference would be the most important factor to the government. for example, the building of railroads in an area which is not workable and costs a large amount of money from the people can <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B9AE422A81B143F97DBA96940A140C0F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_626" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="do " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">do </pwa>harm to the policy of the government in improving infrastructure. so the opinion of the citizens in the enhancement must be a top priority to the government.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0F6E3EB21FC5BFE35EA0C25522DB10B7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1091" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It seems evident that the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">It seems </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0F6E3EB21FC5BFE35EA0C25522DB10B7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1091" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It seems evident that the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">evident</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0F6E3EB21FC5BFE35EA0C25522DB10B7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1091" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It seems evident that the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> that the</pwa> government should invest in constructing more railways than roads. however, I believe that the government should take into account rational measurements before they spend money on railways project. also, they have to make sure that the areas are suitable for the construction and people will support the project.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 24.0651302605 283% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6755.0 1615.20841683 418% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 673.0 315.596192385 213% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.0371471025 5.12529762239 196% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09335287823 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.016200766 2.80592935109 428% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.393759286776 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1860.3 506.74238477 367% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.60771543086 174% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 250.336935671 49.4020404114 507% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.807692308 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.8846153846 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314466612513 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447142495641 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974440651684 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197318435304 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.349629361338 0.056905535591 614% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.42 50.2224549098 -110% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.2 11.3001002004 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.25 12.4159519038 332% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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