Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Most of the people think that using social networks for example, Facebook have disadvantages individually and generally. Whereas, I disagree with that opinion. What I believe is social media have positive impacts on us. They can help us to be able to make contacts with people from different places, to do our business, and to seek for opportunities.
Firstly, social networks such as Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp, and Twitter are great places where all the people around the world can meet. Consequently, they can be friends with the ones who have the same interests. We can create groups just as football fan clubs, study groups, and so on. Obviously, we can have group discussion, and share our thoughts. For the people who are away from family and friends, they do not need to worry about getting lonesome. They can easily keep in touch with their beloved ones by using those social applications.
Secondly, certain people can advertise their business on Facebook. Also, it is kind of search engine tool. We can ask for recommendations about institutions, shops, and things. We can also make money by running online shop business. Moreover, we can be famous by making blogs.
Thirdly, we can get the opportunities through educational pages on Facebook. We can easily apply for internships, summer camp, leadership program, and exchange program. We can even gain knowledge by following the inspired, and world-famous people’s accounts and pages. In addition, healthcare articles can be read on Facebook and we can make our lifestyle healthy and happy.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks if one is not using social networking sites in good ways. The majority of the people are addicted to Facebook and Instagram. Thus, they spend less time with family and prefer living alone with those apps. Besides, students cannot focus on their studies if they are into surfing the net.
In summary, as I mentioned above, benefits overweigh the drawbacks. People should use the social media in good ways to advance the knowledge. Furthermore, we do need to set the limits on them if we are addicted to them. As the disadvantages can be adaptive, I disagree with the given opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, in summary, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13535911602 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78696837058 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1293498715 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8518518519 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4074074074 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157953794935 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507072624383 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670418337015 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954649504159 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713755160574 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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