It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are encouraged to settle down or marry before they turn thirty because it is favorable towards the individual as well as society. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I completely agree with this statement.
Because it is believed maturity is one of the crucial elements needed for a successful marriage, some people would argue it is best to get married after 30. Although this is correct to some extent, knowing each other better and understanding the behavior is more critical, which can be achieved by getting married early and living together under the same roof.
Marrying early in many cultures is believed to be more beneficial for a successful life. It provides an ample amount of time for the couple to understand each other, especially in cases of arranged marriage. Moreover, the couple is young, so they can invest more time in learning each other's interests and likings to be more compatible with each other. This inturn is better for society as better compatibility leads to decreased divorce rates.
Furthermore, the couple has enough time to focus on their career and plan the life they want. On the other hand, they do not need to rush into having kids. For example, as per a survey in India, society believed in having kids within two to three years of marriage. When a couple is in a stable relationship raising a kid comes naturally. It leads to the addition of a happy and healthy individual to society.
In conclusion, getting married before 30 is better as it encourages healthy relationships, thereby reducing the divorce rate and The offsprings produced by these couples are more happy and healthy.
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... within two to three years of marriage. When a couple is in a stable relationship ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97857142857 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6840206476 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2696399399 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303558436358 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954860841523 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593146881528 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162483919151 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477339223406 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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