According to the recent article which is unveiled by the Newyork times, denoted the many offenders who have served the punishment by the jail or polices, attempt the more crimes after the first punishment. This essay describes, what is the reason behind this and what are the actions to be taken to avert these kinds of problems.
To start with, the charges and the punishments which are given by the legislative to the attendee of crimes is varies depends on the reason. Widely, fares are used as punishments for minor crimes. But in terms of major crimes, Prison is predominant punishment, followed by many countries these days. So the offender gets a chance to meet other offenders which leads to making more crimes after they get bail or release from the prison. To exemplify, a recent incident happened in Kerala that son who murdered his mother right after pursuing the first punishment in the Prison.
Secondly, in order to tackle these problems, the government has to organize awareness programs or giving rehabilitation such as teaching the educational courses, participate in making old fashioned goods, manufacturing fabrics. In addition to that, punishments could make the offender's behavior worse, so make them concentrate on learning new skills which would help to get a job. For instance, China outsourcing 25% of prisoners as employes to the industries along with training.
To conclude, crimes are becoming common all over the world and it depends on the situation how it has been encountered. I do believe that giving punishment to the criminals would not solve the problems rather than conducting awareness programs and rehabilitation to the offenders by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offenders'' or 'offender's'?
Suggestion: offenders'; offender's
...ion to that, punishments could make the offenders behavior worse, so make them concentrat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17818181818 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84254803633 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1708946361 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255196436985 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762595260189 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755939784261 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150248527358 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125639794173 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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