In the current era, one of the most debated issues is the professionalism of people. It is evident that large number of people prefer to be entrepreneurs, in lieu of joining a company. This essay will discuss the reasons and demerits of self-employment.
To begin with, there are several reasons for entrepreneurship. The first and foremost aspect to point out in this context is that in many countries the government encourages its citizens to become entrepreneurs. They launched certain incentive schemes which are helpful for people who wish to start their own business. To exemplify, since the government of India launched the "Start-Up India" campaign, many citizens wish to start their own company. The second point in this regard is that nowadays many universities and colleges introduced several courses which offer knowledge and skills to their students in the context of how to build a new business in an innovative way. For instance, Indian Institute of Management, popularly known as IIM is well known for entrepreneur courses.\
However, a few disadvantages can be highlighted. The first of these would be a high capital requirement. Certain businesses need high capital to run their company. If money is not poured as and when required, it might create problems for the business. The second negative point is that business has more risk as compared to the job. If business strategies would not go in favor, a person has to bear the heavy financial loss.
To conclude, people can start their own business after having proper knowledge about it. A person should do proper research before starting a business and try to make it successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0383127402 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9125200262 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168260058846 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503413787917 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528052319677 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958428786432 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541440158394 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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