We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers.They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.What things will they be used for in the future?Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
In the last two decades, there have been many advances in the computer sector, with the life of people in various sectors such as personal life, transportation and even crime detection.I will state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
In recent years, human society has seen significant advances in various sciences, especially computers.It is so difficult to live without computers today.Research shows that many improvements will be made in this area in the future.Computer scientists are looking for ways to transform human life so they can live comfortably.
For example, gadgets are invented that people no longer need to cook or make a cup of tea. As a result, they can save time.As a result, they are using this time to do important things in their lives. For example, a family mom can spend a lot of time with family members, and a business person can do both business and pleasure with the click of a button From his vacation.
It is true that advances in computer science have many advantages, and they can be considered another industrial revolution in human life.But it certainly has major disadvantages as well.First, by using computers in life, people are at risk for health. They even make a cup of tea by computer. And they have no activity in life.And it costs a lot for the government because the government has to spend huge budgets on health and well-being.Second, when all jobs are done with computers in one country, most people lose their jobs.And they cannot afford to pay for their lives, and And unemployed people in society may be led astray, resulting in increased crime rates in society. And this will impose additional costs on governments.
In conclusion,I believe what a computer makes for a comfortable life. But it has many disadvantages in people's lives that can be mitigated by rational use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98381877023 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97226243889 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.727199413 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227939012412 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935920135759 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469569462595 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126327490658 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448301076356 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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