Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life.Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one.Discuss both views and include your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people wonder about advertisement.Some people think that it has negative impact in our life.However, others said it has been playing as positive effect on this world.This is not an easy essay to be answered, but I will look at this issue.
Why advertisement has been playing a negative effect in our life ?Of Course for several reasons: firstly, it motivates the psychological point in everyone, and women in particular.They will run to buy this advertised product especially if it’s from cosmetic roof, just to show their beauty to men, which may lead to negative effects of too much sexual attention.Secondly, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, but it’s nothing important, it’s just another company try to convince you to buy one of their products.It is a real intrusive example of advertisement.Lastly, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of advertisement, you will run to buy it, which will affect your budget.
On the other hand, there are some good sides to advertising.For instance, it compares the prices of many companies which benefit the consumer.Besides, it really opens our vision to see more products which we do not knowit unless the TV or Radio advertised them.In addition to, it breaks our daily routine and allows us to see new faces and learn the language better with the help of the daily updates they deliver through advertisement.
In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects to this essay.I feel that we gain no benefits at all from advertisement, it plays on minds of people buy more things that they do not need it at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59615384615 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.15415062987 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.488189725 49.4020404114 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 363.75 106.682146367 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.25 7.06120827912 655% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163671350727 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928466903126 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036505314081 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928466903126 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036505314081 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.4 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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