You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write an email to your English speaking friend. In your email, explain why you have gone to live in the new city; describe the place where you are now living; and invite your friend to come and see you. Start your letter with 'Dear Anna'. Minimum 150 words. Advice: try to make the email realistic by inventing details. If you can think of a real situation, this is better because you can provide the details without much invention.
Dear Anna,
I know We haven't seen one another since last year but now we finally have the opportunity to meet up because guess what? I've moved to Moscow too!
Basically, one month ago, I received a job offer from well-known international company which has an office in Moscow and it was suggested that I relocated to the capital. I jumped at the chance. Moreover, my airplane tickets were paid by the employer as well as accommodation for the first month. As you can imagine, I'm so happy to get this gig and to get this life-changing chance to live in such a big city!
After arriving, I decided to rent an apartment near Academicheskaya metro station because, as I'd heard, it's very quiet and safe district. Although the building is pretty old, the flat is newly repaired and looks cozy. Moreover, I bought some new pieces of furniture, so now it's become more comfortable. Also, I bet you'll like my grey carpet from IKEA.
Why don’t you pop over to my place if you have a free time. I haven't seen you for ages so I'll have so much to tell you and will be glad to hear some of your news.
Let me know if you are free!
See you soon and take care,
Olga.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Anna, I know We havent seen one another since last year but no...
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...ortunity to meet up because guess what? Ive moved to Moscow too! Basically, on...
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...or the first month. As you can imagine, Im so happy to get this gig and to get thi...
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...ademicheskaya metro station because, as Id heard, its very quiet and safe district...
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...ts become more comfortable. Also, I bet youll like my grey carpet from IKEA. Why...
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... to my place if you have a free time. I havent seen you for ages so Ill have so much t...
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...ree time. I havent seen you for ages so Ill have so much to tell you and will be gl...
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...ell you and will be glad to hear some of your news. Let me know if you are f...
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... are free! See you soon and take care, Olga.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47926267281 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52501763823 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705069124424 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1702157799 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228440244563 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733643211508 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871175940057 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117902282698 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893035426582 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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