Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member
-thanks for the photos and for the holiday
-explain why you did not send a letter
-invite your family member to come and stay with you.
Dear John,
I hope you're doing well. I've just received your letter along with a few photos that were clicked during my trip with you in Toronto. I'm very thankful to you to make this trip wonderful by showing me spectacular places, and for the hospitality that I got from you and other family members. Also, I was engrossed into past memories by watching these amazing photos and selfies.
Please accept my apologies for not contacting you earlier. Actually, after coming back, I got involved in the business project that I mention to you when we went to eat out at 'The Grill' restaurant. But now I'm fully free, so without wasting any time, I'm replying to you.
In the upcoming month, due to the off-season in my business, I'd have plenty of time, thus, why don't you plan to visit India? In fact, I have a spare bedroom at my home that would be suitable for your stay. Please let me know about your plans.
Eagerly waiting for your reply.
Your cousin,
Dheeraj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John, I hope youre doing well. Ive just received your lett...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ear John, I hope youre doing well. Ive just received your letter along with a ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ked during my trip with you in Toronto. Im very thankful to you to make this trip ...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memories'.
Suggestion: memories
...ily members. Also, I was engrossed into past memories by watching these amazing photos and se...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...at out at The Grill restaurant. But now Im fully free, so without wasting any time...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ully free, so without wasting any time, Im replying to you. In the upcoming m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
..., due to the off-season in my business, Id have plenty of time, thus, why dont you...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ness, Id have plenty of time, thus, why dont you plan to visit India? In fact, I hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31363778593 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701149425287 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3713739845 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323110622011 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102820777381 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603883030446 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174314182376 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728991175469 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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