You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional.
This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England.
In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
explain why you are writing
describe your qualifications and experience
explain how they can contact you
Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mr. Sullivan,
I am writing this letter to apply for the Spanish teacher position. Yesterday, I have seen a vacancy in the magazine and I am considering myself the right fit for this job
position.
Let me explain in detail that I have done my master's degree in Spanish from Delhi university, India. Moreover, I have taught as a Spanish professor in the same university for three years from 2015 to 2018 and I had experienced as a tour guide for this particular language for one year from 2018 to 2019. While during
the teaching profession, I worked as a volunteer in a community center, where I used to teach Spanish to teenagers. I got the certification for the best teacher for the Spanish language from the higher authority of India.
I have send my resume via e-mail. if you need further details then you can also contact me by e-mail as well as phone.
My details are mentioned below.
Name- Hitesh Saini
E-mail- Hiteshsaini78@gamil.com
phone number- 4558454545
The best time to contact me is from 9 am to 4 pm.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Hitesh Saini
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Position
...ing myself the right fit for this job position. Let me explain in detail that I h...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anguage for one year from 2018 to 2019. While during the teaching profession, I wor...
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Suggestion: The
... year from 2018 to 2019. While during the teaching profession, I worked as a volu...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
... higher authority of India. I have send my resume via e-mail. if you need furth...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... I have send my resume via e-mail. if you need further details then you can a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94100511839 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5039280147 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21991178564 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763015917424 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654177750844 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677740839771 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772137909968 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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